The Immense Ball Of Rubber Bands
The next morning I woke up with a suprise. When I went downstairs, there was a weird thing in the garden. So I cautiously tip toed outside so no one was aware of where I was. To my suprise I saw an immense shed that was gold and silver and it had a huge, metal lock on it. Hesitantly, I creeped closer and closer and I silently broke the hinges with a sledge hammer. Then a tear fell down my cheek. I could be a billionare if I sold this. It was the ball of rubber bands everyone was looking for!
Abdullah – you have made me smile! I was going to mention that a sledge hammer was not especially quiet but the ending took that from my mind! What a clever twist at the end! Thank you for sharing this work on the 100WC
Comment by Mrs Skinner — March 7, 2012 @ 9:53 am
Wow. I really enjoyed your writing. You have used some brilliant words – cautiously, hesitantly. Well Done. Im wondering why everyone was looking for a ball of rubber bands. You have me hooked! Keep writing!
Comment by Mrs Sutton — March 8, 2012 @ 9:51 pm
I think it was the best story I have read in my life!!!!!!!!
Comment by yusuf — March 9, 2012 @ 9:06 am