There I was sat on my grandmothers brick wall wondering where mother was who she was . I have always wonderd what she lookes like there is a hole in my heart which will never be replaced.My Grandmother always tells me fascinating stories about her.I am now 10 years old and soon to be 11 I have lived with my grandmother all my life and I intend to find my mother. The stress had got to me .
very touching
Very touching but can’t wait to read on
I dont like sad stories but good
good but sad story:D
Great description Katie,yuo used great wordslike intend and facenating!!
I would like to hear more of the story next!!
from Daisy
hi katie great story you have definitely improved since I last saw you! hope you had a good time at robin wood , by the pictures i’ve seen it looks like you did! hope schools going well and you had a cool summer hols . say hello to Mr Quinn , Miss Hibbert and Mrs hall for me .
love simone
Hello Katie , It’s my Libby
Great story you have definatley improved well done ! please make a sequel !
thanks every one im going to do the next chapter soon promise l:)