Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 18-07-2012
Tags: Owen James
This was no ordinary ice cream because their was a elephant in it.suddenly the elephant grew crushed the ice cream cone.Then the elephant ran of then the police cam running after the elephant it crust all the town so nothing was left. so the next day people stared to re billed the town.Sudenly town popted up from the Flor on their is tow towns one on top of the uver.Then the people started nocing down the top town then all the towns fell down then the town cam back agen.Sudenly the elephant cam back in to the ice cream cone.
Its an owen story
I liked the bit where you put there was a elephant in your ice cream i found that quite funny,but you have to check your capital letters and your spellings however it was good.Well done!