My sisters Murderer by Simone Dawes

3

Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 22-06-2012

Tags:

I sat up, Sweat soaking my skin. I heard someone pounding heavily at the door  shrieking at me to open it or else…

I swung my legs over  the bed and tip toed onto landing , my heart was racing as fast as a cheetah as I approached the door . The noise was terrifying but I prised open my clenched fists and turned the door knob …

There was my sister’s murderer. His eyes were bloodshot , his clothes bloody . He opened his mouth and with his repulsive smelling breath said “So, what have we here ? Following in sisters footsteps are we?”

 

 

 

Comments (3)

Great description and story. I thought it was very scary and frightining and had a good ending!

Is that true.

amazing I am going to ask is that true as the description was amazing simone I have no more to say as always you have left me speechless well done because that is very rare for me to be speechless
sash

Write a comment

0 visitors online now
0 guests, 0 members
Max visitors today: 0 at 12:04 am UTC
This month: 1 at 05-01-2013 12:11 am UTC
This year: 1 at 01-01-2013 12:04 am UTC
All time: 7 at 11-23-2011 07:01 pm UTC