Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 18-06-2012
Tags: Callum Murray
They were coming as I saw the door smash and lots of slimy, grotesque hands sticking through it. I qiuckly grabbed my gun from the bag ready for the zombies. I guessed right as there were dark and hunched over shadows coming my way. I held them of for a minute but there was too many of them and they came so close Iwas fighting with my bare hands.I was sure enough I was dead this time until a round of ammunition came flying from the stairs and saved my life.
A vioce shouted “come up the stairs qiuckly”
When that happened I instantly knew it was my brother so I dodged my way throgh all the zombies and reached my brothers safety, well thats what I thought. But now we were trapped upstairs all alone with no help…….
Cricket Callum! What a scary story with lots of action in it. I can’t see the prompt but as its you, I’ll let it go this time!
Please thank your teacher for moving your pieces and suggest that only your Christian names are put on your stories. That way you are kept safe!
Good work, Callum! A well-written horror story for the 100 word challenge. I especially like the description of those slimy, grotesque hands.
Very good callum i like at the end where its a mystery if you are gona die.