Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 18-07-2012
Then it was night and i was nearly asleep when some clowns suddenly walked into my room i froze. They had bright orange hair that was curly and it stook up realy high like jedward. Then they came closer. They said I WILL KILL YOU. Then i ran my secret way but i forgot it led to my freinds so i arived at there house. I didnt even know were i was so i went back. when i arived back at home they had all gone but i was still really scared that i couldnt get to sleep.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 18-07-2012
One day i went to the best ice-cream parlor ever. My best freind had said all the ice-creams were really creamy. As we driving by,everyone we drove past had a ice-cream. Then we finnally arived but we had to get through humongus que. We were last.
As we finnaly came to the front of the que all the vanilla ice-cream had gone so i choese the new flavor bubble gum. As i took the first lick it tasted amazing, This was no ordinary ice-cream it was stunning. It had 3 flakes and loads of sprinkles and when i got home i wanted another.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 07-07-2012
It was the grandest and biggest moment for me to finnaly live the life of a oliympian. My race was about to begin when when this shock ran through my head i was so nervous but now i felt really confident then the race had finished and i came first this was only the start of my dream. Suddenly i realized i was everywhere, every corner and in every window i looked in, i saw me. pictures of me on the news im so greatful for what i have i wouldnt change a thing. i am glad to be part of team gb
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 22-06-2012
I was there standing in the haunted house i finnaly shut the door i was locked in. In the house all there was were ripped furniture. there was just enought to see the blood red footprints. As i walked up the dustey and creekey stairs. Right at the top was a gun. just as i was about to pick the gun up i heard a scream!!! The noise was terifing but i still had to explore the house. There was loads more to see. Then i walked into the bedroom. There was blood all over the bed. Then , i suddenly ran.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 20-06-2012
One night i went down to my mothers grave. It was midnight. One of my freinds said that some people from there graves come out at night but i didnt belive her. Then somthing came up behind me, it was a ghoust. I was terrified. I was walking backwouds and then i bumped into anouther ghost. Suddenly i saw my mum. She said ” darling i am glad you are here, i need to tell you who i really am i was a murder, i murdered 1 man and then murded myself ” . ” please go you dont want to see me.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 02-06-2012
Dear Fatimata
I am shocked at how people in africa can live like this. I feel very sorry for you and other young children who have no food to eat. In England we all have a plate of food in front of us, but at the other side of the world they have nothing. I think you should have a break, just once every two weeks. It should be illegal for a five year old child to work in a gold mine. I am really upset for you and for your family and i hope things change for you.
from millie hodge , kirkheaton
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 25-05-2012
The 100word challenge is a unique thing to have. It inspires all diffrent types of writers from any were. If you are an able writer then you can try writing the 100wc which you will have some words to include in your writing or mabye a video or picture. Aswell if you arnt so good at writing there is a prompt and then you have to write a 5 sentance challenge. Aswell it can boost your edgucation. You can also comment on peoples work and they will comment on yours from any were in the world also adults. SO COME JOIN TODAY!!!
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 11-05-2012
In the morning i was terrified to get out of my bed it was still dark and thre were black and white masks all around my room. 5 minutes later i slowly crept out of my bed and went downstairs. There was a parcal at the door adressed to me so i toar it open like a a lion riping into some meat.
It was a old varce. It was from anciant greece. But why would somone give me this ? And who is it from? I sat there all day pusled something wasnt right from some ghosts suddenly apeering to somone sending me a varce from anciant greece it just wasnt right.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 10-05-2012
One day i woke up feeling realy strange. Then i walked down stairs i was having my breakfast and suddenly i thought to myself now what do i need. It was realy weird everyone new what thay needed to have breakfast but i didnt . After all the confusuance at school there were a cople more instore for me. When i was doing my homwork i didnt know what to use. And when i was going to bed i didnt know what to were. I felt like the weirdist person ever. but finally i fell asleep hoping the confusuance would go.
Posted by pupil | Posted in King Smith | Posted on 04-05-2012
That night i was fast asleep but then i woke up and the door swong wide open. Nothing was there but a white strange figer. It kept moving towords me. sweat pored down me like a waterfall. Then the figer disserpered. I couldnt move a muscle but then, i ran all the way to my mums room. I shouted ” MUM, MUM THERES A GHOST.
She replied ” Darling its only a nightmare” . but i was certain that a ghost was there standing in my room. Then i went back to my room and closed my eyes. then i opened my eyes and there it was again standing infront of me . But this time there were 2 ghosts i thoght to myself what am i going to do.
I just screemed and my mum came sprinting down but the ghosts were gone . ” Darling darling whats up now” ” THERE ARE GHOSTS” ” Darling just go to sleep”.
Then i fell fast asleep and it was all over.