100 word challenges

Once upon a time there was a girl called Molly. She loved to
dance and swim. One day she went to her dance club and she got kicked out she
was so sad about it but she said to herself “I have a swimming test on Monday and
a am in the finals” and soon Monday came and she got all excited about it but
her mum could not take her to swimming. She was super sad about that. Molly went
in to her room and people were in and they said surprise it is your birthday! Thanks.

 

 

By Amelia

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4 Responses to 100 word challenges

  1. Mrs C says:

    Wow!!! Look at what you can do with 100 words!!! Fantastic!!!! SC :-)

  2. Dughall McCormick says:

    Well done Amelia! I love the way you have fitted a whole story into 100 words. I particularly like the surprise ending.

  3. aimee says:

    i love your story Amelia

  4. Emma 2 says:

    Wow amelia you actully did a story with 100 words

    Emma 2

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