The lonely chip part two

Sophie’s Mum ran outside and said “are you alright?” “NO, you threw the chip out of the window didn’t you!” shouted Sophie. Sophie picked the chip up and put it back into the old hamster cage. “I’m sorry” replied Mum “I don’t care, get out of my room NOW!” shouted Sophie.  Sophie was upset, tired and furious.

The next day, Sophie had forgiven her mum. “I’m sorry I shouted at you” said Sophie ” I’m sorry for throwing the chip out of the window.” said her Mum. Meanwhile Sophie’s Dad came home tired and hungry. He saw the chip and ate it!

The end

By John 

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4 Responses to The lonely chip part two

  1. sam says:

    Once again poor chip!

  2. Dughall McCormick says:

    Well done for using speech in your story.

    I love the ending!

  3. John says:

    Cool good ending.

  4. Class JL says:

    Poor chip I think it would be hurt from being frown out the window.

    From George.

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