Tag Archives: Literacy

we have been doing the highway man in our class and we would like to show you the peom. PART ONE I THE wind was a torrent of darkness among the gusty trees, The moon was a ghostly galleon tossed … Continue reading →

On a dark mistey night, there was a dark black lake in the mosterrus forest! One dark night Trevor and Scott entered the forest but they didn’t know Martin and Victor were folowing them!  The forest had branches like fingers, … Continue reading →

I was alone. The forest was dark. The only light was the balloon like moon,high in the sky. I could only just see it through the opaque canopy of the trees. It was twelve o’clock. I yawned. All of my … Continue reading →

Robert became an orphan when he was 3. He is now 13. Rob’s parents were on a walk with him one day when a great, big, thick and old oak tree mysteriously fell on them and left Robert rolling on … Continue reading →

The girl called Emma walked closer to the school gates and as she got further there she got more scared and scared. The school looked like a prison with metal bars on the outside of the windows, the school was very little … Continue reading →

As Lucy was walking along the rocky beach she could see an island. Lucy kept walking, she now could see a mermaid, for what she thought it was, swimming along side her. The island behind the mermaid bobbing up and … Continue reading →

We have been inspired by the work done by the year 5s at Mereside Primary (http://meresideyear5.primaryblogger.co.uk/2012/01/03/writing-extended-sentences/) on improving sentences so had a go ourselves. We had three choices: our sentences could be about a sitting cat, a speeding train, or … Continue reading →