Look at the amazing work Bradley did last week in his Learning Log!
Well done Bradley, this is a fantastic piece of writing with excellent adjectives, and the illustrations are also superb. We were all really proud of you, and think you went the ‘extra mile’ with your homework. 
A long way out on the deeep bule sea there was a boat. On the boat there was a diver he was called kasim and he was the best the wold. He was looking for the beautiful Rainbow Fish. He couldn’;t find the Rainbow Fish. Suddenly he meet a big bule octopus.
A long way owt on the deep bloow sea there was a boat and on the boat there was a diver. He was a professional diver and the best in howll entire owshn. he wos lucin fo raimbow fish and he met a star fish and the diver sed hav you seen raimbow fish no sed the star fish and the star fish sed if you gow behind the rocs you will faynd the sea snake mabee he might no wer raimbow fish is and the diver went behind the rocs.
Along way out on the deep blu sea way there was a boat! on the boat there was there a diver. Ali then hee put his wet suit and hee put on his Flipps and hee put on his oschn tanc and hee put on his masc and hee went in the wotr.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the boat there was a diver he was called Mac. He was a good diver a
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the boat there was a diver called Ibrahim and he wanted to see Rainbow Fish. He met the fredleey shark and
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the boat there was Sabah. she saw shell fish.
A long way out in the deep blue sea there was a boat.On the boat there was diver called Shazad he was wearing a wet suit and flippers. He was looking for Rainbow Fish he went in the sea and he saw a big shark and the green sae snail and a beautiful ray fish.Shazd dive in the sea and he saw a shark.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there lived a diver called Safia . She was a brilliant swimmer and she had always which wanted to find the Rainbow Fish was the most beautiful fish in the ocean.He swam deeper and deeper into the cold sea when suddenly he saw a star fish, he said “Have you seen the Rainbow Fish?” “No” said the starfish. Then he saw a jellyfish, he said “Have you seen the Rainbow fish?” Yes said the jellyfish go into the dark cave.Then he saw a multicoloured Rainbow Fish.He was so amazed seeing the Rainbow Fish.The Rainbow Fish gave a glittery scale to the diver.The beautiful Rainbow Fish and the diver became friends.The diver was delighted.
A long way out on the deep blue sae there was a boat. On the boot thare was a diver called Kasim he went into the sea with his mask and his oxygen tank.Right down in the deep blue sea a little fin touched him.Hi said a blue fish can i help you? I am looking fo the rainbow Fish plees can you hellp can you hellp me yes I will. thank you sed the littll blue fish.The littll blue fish took the diver to see the rainbow FISH.
A long way out in the deep blue sea there was a boat.Thene wos a diver called Aman he was the best diver in the in the cold he sea. He was looking for the Ranbow fish becawe was the most beautiful in the entine ocean . He saw a graiy rai fish he sead where is the Rainbow fish ? The rai fish said go deeper and deeper and you will find him.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the deep blue sea in the boat there was a diver the divers name was Aaminah. The diver puts her wetsut on and she put her flipes and her oxyges tank on too and she jumt into the woter she was fainding the raibow fish.Aaminah faunda a cl0wn fish , Aaminah said “have you seen the Rainbow Fish?”. “No” said the clownfish. So Aaminah went to find Rainbow Fish. Aaminah found a friendly, brown star fish. Aaminah said “Have you seen the Rainbow Fish?”.”Yes” said the star fish. Aaminah went quickly , as fast as she could.Aaminah found the Rainbow Fish and the Rainbow Fish gave one of his sparkly , shiny scales to the diver. The diver was proud of himself and she was excited and amazed because the Rainbow Fish was so beautif, they played happily together in the deep,blue sea.
Once upon a time there was a diver he wanted to find the Rainbow Fish. He knew it was the most bueatiful fish in the entiyur oshan. So he put on his flipus and his wet soot. Then he put on his oxygen tank. He jumped into the water, he swam down and up, he still couldn’t find it.
He saw the amazing coral and the fabulous tropicalfish. Then he bangd his hed on the baot. He reelisd that he fgot abuot the Rainbow fish he ternd arow and he sor the Rainbow fish.SO. He gave up but then he found a zebra tiger shark and saw some seaweed. He s aw lots of beautiful fish that he fogot aboa the Rainbow fish. He banged his head on the boat and he realised that he had forgotten about the Rainbow again. Finally he found the most beautiful Rainbow fish, he fed it and he said nice things to him. He took him home and he never let go of him, they ate together.They went back on the boat, he dropped Rainbow Fish back in the ocean, he had to say goodbye to the Rainbow fish, he then went back home, he had had an amazing day!!!
Along way out in the deep blue sea ther was a boat .On the boat ther was Amina the perfect diver. She went in the sea and she was swimming and diving in the sea. She was looking for the Rainbow Fish then Amina said that have seen the Rainbow Fish.
A long way out in the deep bluo sea there was a big bluo bout.On the bout was a diver his name was Peter Parker.Then Peter puton his wetsuit and his flippers and his oxygen tank and he dived into the cold sea and saw lots of beautiful fish.Suddenly a huge whale was behind him andthen Peter asked if he had seen the Rainbow fish.”I know where the Rainbow Fish is”.Shell be in the cave maby said the whale okay said Peter il chek there then.Thank you for the help said Peter . So then Peter went to the cave and he met a clewer sea snake and the diver asket if he had seen the Rain bow fish . He Said “I’ll take you there”. They swam deeper into the ocean, in the distance he saw a shimmering light . As he got closer he saw the beautiful Rainbow Fish, he felt so happy that he had found him. The kind Rainbow Fish gave him one of his shiny, sparkly scales and they played together in the deep blue sea.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the boat there was a diver her name was Nour. Nour wanted to find the rainbow fish because she knew he was the most beutiful fish in the entire ocean. then she found a sea horse the sea horse no I havnt seen the rainbow fish then Nour carid on swiming she found a cave. in the cave there was a octipos thhe octipos had purple eyes Nour asced the octipos have you seen the rainbow fish yes I Have seen the rainbow fish folow me. so Nour folowd the octipos thay found the Rainbow Fish. He had shiny, glittering scales and beautiful fins and he gave a scale to Nour and they became the best of friends.
A long way 0ut on the deep blue sea there was a boat. On the boat there was a dives called usman. He went in the deep blue sea.Then he out his flippers on then he put his mask onthen he jumped off eboat. he saw a jelly Fish. He asked the jelly fish if he had seen the Rainbow Fish. He said no. Then he saw a sea snail. he asked the sea snail have you seen the Rainbow Fish. He said yess.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat . On the boat there was a diver not any ordinary diver but the best diver in the deep blue sea . He dived into the sea and he met the shark and the diver said have you seen the Rainbow Fish and the shark said no. I have not seen the Rainbow Fish. The diver swam to the dark cave and he found the octopus. The diver said have you seen the Rainbow Fish and the octopus said yes I have. go to the seaweed by the rocks. The diver swam to the seaweed and by the rocks and he found the Rainbow Fish. The Rainbow Fish had colourful, shimmering scales. The Rainbow fish gave the diver one shiny scale and the diver houme. The diver felt happy.
A long way out on the deep blue sea there was a boat.On the boat there was a diver not a ordinarydiver but the best diver in the entire ocean.One day he swam into the cold sea he wanted to find the Rainbow Fish but he could not find the Rainbow Fish.The diver met a zebra shark and asked have you seen the Rainbow Fish? No,said the zabra shark.The diver went deeper and deeper until he met a beautiful star fish.”Have you seen the Rainbow Fish”. “No” said the star fish. The diver kept on looking. He saw a shimmering scale, it was the beautiful ,multicoloured Rainbow Fish. He w as so happy and he was amazed at the beautiful fish before him.The Rainbow Fish wanted to be friends so he gave a shiny scale to the diver, he was very happy!
